[@LazyEgg] & [@smarty0114], I like your guys characters and format. I especially like Andy's backstory and Wells's personality. They are both accepted. [@Trooper], I am not sure how I should feel about Patrick. I can understand him being apart of a gang that's slowly disappearing because of the police, but I don't think that the town would have an Irish mob. Your personality is fine; however, the backstory doesn't reveals much about his life. Where was he born? How did he join the local gang? Why? Why did he come to Baltham? You should share that kind of stuff in your background. Fix those things and mention me so I can re-read it. Also, don't post on the character tab unless you are accepted.