Ok up for review. [hider=Hitori] [color=f26522][center][h1]Hirtori Nagasaki[/h1][/center][/color] ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [center][img]http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/narutooriginals/images/6/6e/Yoruha_appareance.png/revision/latest?cb=20131020114911[/img][/center] ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [h3]Personalia[/h3] [sub]Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure[/sub] [center][color=f26522]“When did I begin? Better yet, when have I stopped?”[/color][/center] [indent]| Birthname: | [indent][i]Nagasaki, Hitori.[/i][/indent] | Nicknames: | [indent][i]Hit.[/i][/indent] | Alias: | [indent][i]The Fool[/i][/indent] | Sex: | [indent][i]Male[/i][/indent] | Age: | [indent][i]18[/i][/indent] | Birthplace: | [indent][i]Konohagakure [/i][/indent] | Bloodline: | [indent][i]Nagasaki[/i][/indent] | Rank: | [indent][i]Chunin[/i][/indent] [/indent] [center]————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [h3]Psychology & History[/h3] [sub]From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel[/sub] [i][color=f26522]“Your Perception is your reality. Good thing I'm the only one who can see clearly.”[/color][/i][/center] [indent]| Personal biography: | [indent][i]Since birth Hitori was a silly individual. Always with a grin painted on his face and a cool demeanor that always allowed him to make friends quite easily. At the same time he seems to never care about anything, never opinionated on any subject and using facts to make his judgements on ideals. As he grew older and the hardships began to appear he became more calculated with any decision he makes. Always making a choice that would have the higher chance of achieving his goal. In combat he seems to change. While usually never serious, he makes a exception when it comes to the well being of him, his friends, and family. Staying almost completely quiet and with his hands in his pockets, taking slow strides and movement until he finds it necessary to act. To see it for the first time, one would assume he had a death wish or was just a lazy individual. His actions gave him the Title of "The Fool". One part being for his care free silly personality, the other part being how he fools others to underestimate him until he reveals his true nature. When things are usually not going his way, Hitori has a habit of losing himself to a built up temper and goes into a fit of rage that usually causes trouble to him and his Allies. [/i][/indent] | Family biography: | [indent][i]The Nagasaki Clan was always a small clan that has never gained to much renown, but still respected for some of the individuals that were born to the name. The clan slowly began to die out before the Winter, now only leaving one family. Although this never came as a problem for his family, as they all have a care free view of the world. If the clan was to die out, it was just how it was supposed to be, but if it were to blossom then luck had shine upon them.[/i][/indent] | Family ties: | [indent][i] Hikari Nami| Mother | 41, Hitori's House, Stay at home Mother. Born an Orphan. Daku Nagasaki| Father to Hitori| 42, Hitori's House, a Farmer for Konohagakure. An ex Jounin before the Winter. Sutakku Nagasaki| Brother to Hitori | 8, Hitori's House. Has problems walking since birth, but known to be a Prodigy for being the best shot with a bow in the history of Konohagakure. [/i][/indent] | Dreams and fears: | [indent][i] Hitori has a modest dream of protecting his family. Although it also causes great fear that he could lose them someday. Hitori seems to be the only one to care for his Family and overall clan to grow and be known all around Konohagakure. Hitori hopes to be the catalyst for its bright future. [/i][/indent][/indent] [center]————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— [h3]Combat Reports[/h3] [sub]From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches[/sub] [i][color=f26522]“No. They didn't make it...”[/color][/i][/center] [indent]| Fighting style: | [indent][i]Hitori has followed his family's fighting style of Kenjutsu with heavy support from Genjutsu. He usually will only use his Genjutsu to open up the target for a swift safe attack. Usually in battle he becomes cold and calculated, taking his time to figure out where to strike or save an ally.[/i][/indent] | Kekkei genkai - bloodline limit: | [indent][u]Disrupting Chakra Flow[/u] [indent] [u]Description[/u] [indent]Passed on to almost all that are born to the Nagasaki Family. This Kekkei genka makes it impossible to all but the highest of Genjutsu to be used on the person who has this. It also makes user's aware if any Genjutsu was used on them. It is shown to be used when the eye of the user completely turning a beastly yellow, with a small black tome replacing the eye's pupil. It is usually used to surprise the attacker, fooling them into thinking their Genjutsu is still working. In the user's eyes the world slows down and becomes somewhat fuzzy.[/indent] [u]Strengths[/u] [indent]It makes Genjutsu almost impossible to be used on the holder. It can detect if Genjutsu is was or is being used on them. In Hitori's current strength he could block up to a single rank B Technique.[/indent] [u]Weaknesses[/u] [indent]This requires a significant amount a chakra to be used. High level of Taijutsu will cause great confusion to the users, due to the slow down effect and Taijutsu being the only types of techniques that still will move at a normal speed.[/indent][/indent][/indent] [indent]| Ninja techniques: | [indent][u]A rank techniques[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Bringer-of-Darkness_Technique]Bringer-of-Darkness Technique[/url][/indent] [u]B rank techniques[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Clone_Technique]Shadow Clone Technique[/url][/indent] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Demonic_Illusion:_Tree_Binding_Death]Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death[/url][/indent] [indent]Unlimited Blade Works[/indent] [u]C rank techniques[/u] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fireball_Technique]Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique[/url][/indent] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Phoenix_Sage_Fire_Technique]Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique[/url][/indent] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Demonic_Illusion:_False_Surroundings_Technique]Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique[/url][/indent] [indent][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sly_Mind_Affect_Technique]Sly Mind Affect Technique[/url][/indent] [indent]Rage Incarnate: Blade Barrage[/indent] [u]D rank techniques[/u] N/A [u]E rank techniques[/u] N/A [/indent][/indent] | Custom techniques: | [indent][u]Unlimited Blade Works[/u][/indent] [u]Rank[/u] [indent]B[/indent] [u]Range[/u] [indent]Medium Range - Precise[/indent] [u]Description[/u] [indent]This Genjutsu was created by Hitori on complete accident while trying to master his father's jutsu "Four Swords of the Apocalypse". The technique makes the user believe projectiles are being hurled by Hitori with an invisible force. It could be from a single shuriken to a barrage of Kunai, regardless they are all fake and pose no true physical damage. The point of the jutsu is to create an opening to a unsuspecting victim. The jutsu will almost instantly releases its hold on the victim as soon as one of the imaginary blades makes contact, usually due to the victim realizing it caused no damage. The time it takes to fade is completely on the victim's attitude. A rash hot headed individual will find easy to block Kunai, while a level headed ninja will have to deal with a barrage of projectiles.[/indent] [/indent] [indent][u]Jutsu name[/u] [indent]Rage Incarnate: Blade Barrage[/indent] [u]Rank[/u] [indent]C[/indent] [u]Range[/u] [indent]Close - Unpredictable[/indent] [u]Description[/u] [indent]A Kenjutsu technique that sends Chakra rushing through the user's nervous system giving him increased strength and speed. The technique is only used when Hitori is backed into a corner and enraged, sending a barrage of completely uncoordinated and random attacks with any weapon he can get a hold of. While it is possible to overwhelm the enemy, it also opens himself wide open to any properly planned counter attacks. This burns through chakra at a high speed and can easily send the user into a coma due to the lack of chakra left in the body.[/indent] [/indent] [indent] | Weapons: |[/indent] [indent][u]Weapon name[/u] [indent]Cruel Reality[/indent] [u]Weapon, tool, or object type[/u] [indent]Short Sword[/indent] [u]Description[/u] [indent]This straight short sword is a heirloom to the Nagasaki clan. The only notable feature is it's strange metal property that allows the blade to bend and even have a little of a bounce to the blade.[/indent] [hider=Appearance][img] http://www.edgesofreality.com/image_manager/attributes/image/image_60/1097496383_4240339494_thumbnail.jpg[/img] [/hider] [indent][u]Weapon name[/u] [indent]Kunai[/indent][/indent] [/indent] [/hider]