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[@TemplarKnight07]
[b][u]The Good[/u][/b][list][*]As I read your history I was ready to get mad that you weren't gonna explain why a Canadian had come all the way to Germany just to join the RP. Then you explained it. LOL. His motivations are pretty interesting and you've covered all your bases in this respect. Kudos.[*]"Owl" ties with "Roach" as my favorite nickname so far in the census.[*]Interesting choice in weapons. His fighting style will be interesting to see. Two pistols tho![/list][b][u]Improvements Needed[/u][/b][list][*]I'm not sure the parents would approve of their son wanting to wander into the Zone (for [i]any[/i] reason). Might be better to just leave it at "getting a Masters in a foreign exchange program," and then acquire the survival supplies while over there.[*][i]Hare[/i]-brained. ;)[*]You need an unarmored photo, bro, or at least a physical description.[/list]
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Alright. I just didn't see any unarmoured photos on the others so I didn't understand what the deal was.

As for the parents bit it was mostly just a way to explain how he got the money together to buy some basic gear and bribe his way in, he obviously didn't ask permission to go to The Zone. But I'll edit them out.