[quote=@Vongola_Hasayo]
[@Leslie Hall] Everything looks fine to me. I'd rather you not use concrete numbers when it comes to Expose weakness. Numbers in RP combat just tend to muddy the waters. And I'd like you to at least PM me about the reasons for his mother's arrest since you pointed out the fallacies in the Rune Knights reasons yourself you clearly have something. It's fine if you don't want to reveal it to everyone else but GM needs to know. Other than that he's good to go.
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I'm heading to work soon so I can't make those edits right away, nor can I PM you until this evening. Though I'll get on it as soon as I can.

I'm also happy to change the wording of his spells to explain it without numbers. Though for my own sake I'll be keeping the number values in brackets just because I find it easier to understand. I'm sure there are also others who are similar in that regard.

[quote=@LostDestiny]
[@Leslie Hall] If you want, yea. They can totally be a team. ^-^


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Awesome. I'll PM you later and we can try and flesh out their relationship a bit. It's quite funny because I based my character off of Daria and your character is an artist, just like Daria's best friend Jane.

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