Absolutely! I will try to keep an open mind for any future possibilities. :D

Thank you so much! You're very kind -- I am keeping all of your feedback in my notes for writing. 
As for one, or both...gosh, that's difficult to say so early on. Did you have a preference? I am completely fine with one or both. 

I absolutely loved reading your thoughts!! Makes me very happy, and I am so glad that you liked it! I think there's a bit of Axel's personality in all of us... :lol 
& You can totally add that to your book of quotes! I'd be honored. 

Now, for yours: your post kept me on the edge of my seat! Me, being my naive self, actually believed that Elayra may have hurt Drust's feelings by the remark of him losing his mind. When she started to apologize, I wondered if that was because he was sensitive about the topic...instead, he totally lashed out! That was [i]awesome![/i] (I was worried for Elayra, but I had hope that she could hold her own!)

This scene/line:

[i]Her eyebrows rose in a mix of mockery and pity when the boy slipped and landed in a mud puddle. “You’re sure that’s Hatter’s son?”	
“The evidence points to it.”

[/i] 

That totally cracked me up! I love the dialog of these two.

I also really like how you wrote the fight scenes between them. I could see all of it within my head. 

Another thing your post made me realize is how strange modern Earth must be for them. Not only for the world itself, but the things we would take for granted (such as when you wrote that Elayra did not know what Java was). 

Thank you for the indentation tips!! :wub I'll give it a shot for my next post. If all else fails, I'll fall back on the double returns.