[@Not Fishing]He seems good. All I'd want you to add is what he did after deciding to leave his cavern home. Nothing specific, just that he merc'ed his way to the south east and then back north east until he found the moonsea and sailed to Hulburg or something. Other than that, he's done. You can even put him in the character tab and post for him as long as you add maybe 3 sentences to his history adding that.