[@Raddum]
Nicely posted again.

The closest thing I can think of to a 'complaint' was the gap between Freya's big explanation about Baron not existing. She mentioned Cid, and I feel like this would've completely thrown Cecil off and possibly caused him not to question her about the Dragoon thing (which happened afterwards, unless you post just made it [i]look[/i] that way. He'd likely have waited until she finished speaking before mentioning the Cid thing, but I'm wondering if her words would have stopped him mentioning Kain? He also drifted into thinking about Rosa afterwards, which might've been impossible with such an interruption in his thoughts.

Sometimes my attention to detail makes things complicated for me.