[quote=@Snagglepuss89]
[@Diggerton]Didn't you already rewrite it all once?
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Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Edit: Non-meme response Edition: Yeah, this is my third pass at it. In my defense the second edition wasn't so much a rewrite as me adding more details because I felt like it need to be bigger. This time I mainly wanted two tackle two things I saw as pretty big problems for Emma in the OS:

1. Holy fuck did I flanderize the shit out of her. I kind of lost focus of who exactly my character was supposed to be and she became a total shy stuttering mess, which is totally off the mark of what I wanted.

2. I realized that instead of just using the OS to put down Emma's face observations of the personality section of other people CS's I should probably be using it more to say something about my character that wasn't already in my CS. 

[color=2E2C2D]jan is a big loser[/color]