[@FallenTrinity] I'm sorry! I wish I'd seen this earlier but I've been dealing with family for a while now. No, I'm not one of those GMs that will turn anyone away for a 'bad' CS. I'll work with you to improve it if the need is there. And if RPers would rather than happen in private rather than on here, I'm fine with that too, just let me know. 

I would like to point out that there is a sample CS on the Character Tab. I'll go move it now so it's more visible. It's the Principal of the school, Alex Hampton.