[@GingerBoi123] Looks like a great character. I'm really looking forward to seeing the two of them tackle the world. You can move him to the char tab.

[@Vashonn] That is a really entertaining character. I didn't really think I would get a water character due to them being strongest with illusion and mind-control things, but I think you've done a great job with Izumi. To the char tab you go.

[@Bishop] [hider=uh oh, hider, bad news]
Relax, it's not all bad, there are just a few details that I don't feel fit the world.
To be frank, I have looked at your CS before and noted some of these things since day 1. However, I believe that criticizing an unfinished idea is not only counter-creative but also premature. Some ideas sound weird if you only hear half of them, but will make sense once all the info is there. I don't want you to feel like you've wasted any time on this character

To start out, the name – Grover. Would it be rude to ask for an asian-sounding name? You can still keep Grover as the proxy name for whatever that thing is that infested your character.

Robot -  This is really the big one. I can't say how clear I've been with my description of the world, but the way I imagined it is pretty much a medieval asian setting. Bringing a robot into it just feels wrong. It would be so out of place, a thousand years or more ahead of its time. 
With that said I like the way you've built the character to fit with the idea, and I'm getting a real Orochimaru (Naruto) vibe from the guy, which is something you don't see very often. 
To be constructive, and not just a bitch, how do you feel about making a small change from robot to some kind of Venom-like (Spider-man) parasite? It would still allow for all the stuff you've written, but would fit the world a bit better.

Special traits – You're kind of stacking the advantages here. 
Note: What I am NOT saying is; lose the bullshit, dipshit.
What I AM saying is; this will affect the game. 

Sea Dweller – What? 
Propellers, above and below… Are you flying? Why stay away from the water? What is going on?[/hider]