Hook is awesome! You will have to tell me your opinion of hims as you get to know him. :)

I think I am going to have him come with her when she runs away.... But it's gonna go much deeper then just wanting to protect her. I might have to get into his background some to show all the reasons why he is following her, and to show why he is so loyal to her. :) it's gonna be fun to get into!!

Brice won't be a main main character. He will just be a major supporting character. ^.^ As for the Morrok, I'm not sure if he would go after her directly. He's not that straight forward. He is more a sit back and watch them play right into his hand kind of leader. I have such big plans for him! Lol. 

I think the reason it has turned out so well is because of a combination of things. First our writing styles and personalities work really well together. Second, because there was not plot, we have been able to be more creative with what we thrown in because we don't have to worry about any end goal per say. Which just make it so much fun! We can throw anything at them that we want and that freedom is why I don't know what my characters will be doing. ^.^

It's alright if it's not as long. It's about quality anyway. :)!