Crim: ya a few typos but not many, whenever you get the chance just go through and fix what you find. Otherwise looks fine to me gota say that is a lot of things that go boom which does work for demolition. But he looks good and I'll accept him. Now the next question is where do you want to go for our first mission. I think I know where would be best, but ill let you pick.

Leaf: I'm going to guess your on the assault team right?