And now I'm back, Christmas was awesome, but now it's all reality and stuff again. [hider=Bishop] [quote]First things first. He is not a robot. More like he got a permanent metal encasing as a skin, permanent armor. His legs when he transforms are like that to allow him to achieve greater speed and to increase supportibility of his weoght.But inside he's all flesh and blood and mush. So same as the venom concept you mentioned except with a constant metal armor. To say one last thing on this, even if he had 0 metal on him, all his limbs and such would function the same except look more fleshy. So same as the nymph who got metallic claws as weapons he got metalic body armor. And about sea dweller... The basic concept was that he could swim fast by rotating limbs as propellers. But that seems a lot like transformers now that I think about it. Now that I explained, if it still bothers you I'll go with the venom idea you proposed. And I also changed the special traits. If you have a problem with one in particular tell me and I'll remove it.[/quote] This explanation makes a lot of sense, and is pretty close to how you described the power in your character. What got me was that you wrote robot as gender. It made me wonder about what your character concept really was and I just wanted to make sure. The problem with sea dweller was simply that I couldn't picture what was going on, I won't tell you to remove it or anything, but perhaps you could describe it a bit better? Special traits were all fine. Having many advantages simply means that whoever you use them on will quickly realise what's going on and try to get help. The Inquisition would truly be interested in someone like that ;) You could also add something about the characters brain-smarts under skills and abilities, but you don't have to.[/hider] [quote=@Lord of Evil] To be honest, I thought grover was supposed to be more of a living weapon type deal rather than a robot... [/quote] Indeed, that is exactly why I brought it up and why I likened the character to Venom. I think that Bishop is our last brother in arms to have expressed interest so I'll start with the introductory post for the IC. Just to be safe, is there anyone who would like to start together or are everyone fine with starting in different places?