[quote=@ineffable]
[@Rekaigan][@rush99999]
I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING WRONG WITH THOSE WORDS.
Sorry for that by the way.  That's awful writing but honestly couldn't think of anything.  Maybe i should have Laina killed off?
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NO! Ugh, why is it that every time I start developing awesome plans for someone, they start plans to quit!? First it was XenoCyanide; I figured Xen and the Captain would make a great couple. Then he quits. Now I'm dreaming of Laina becoming an epic awesome world-leading healer, and ineffable drops the "killed-off" phrase.

Cut it out! >:-(

Now, I know her writing would have looked better had I not read the OOC first. It looked pretty good all by itself, actually. Once I read the OOC, though, I couldn't help thinking that Laina sounded a bit evil. It could stand to be rewritten, but goodness gracious, don't kill Laina off over it!!