[quote=@Arkaotic] [@Soragoku] Sorry dude, didn't even notice that myself till now. Also ooo sheet, things getting tense over here with the fleshspinner [/quote] kaezira fucking [i]hates[/i] those things. in his eyes, magic is a beautiful work of art. and he sees their form of magic is a mockery of this art form. [quote=@Jeyma] Two people have posted while I was writing, and both times I've had to nearly re-write the whole fucking thing. :lol [/quote] deepest apologies. [quote=@Jeyma] Your posts were certainly detailed enough for me. I don't think they lacked anything [i]necessary.[/i] That's what matters. Of all people, I know how fun it is to add tons of detail, but don't feel obligated to put more facts in a post than are needed. When you write, the goal should be to tell someone what happened, how it happened, and who was involved in it's happening. If a detail is not relevant, don't include it, and don't feel the need to apologize for not having it. :D [/quote] yea i guess that makes sense. but i find that adding the detail makes the reading experience more enjoyable and a lot more novel-like.