@Corpsylvania: Okay, to start with she should probably have a surname, and there needs to be a race bio for Cat Beastkin(assuming you mean Cat Beastkin by catkin, though, um, I've been taking the written-up Ratkin and Beastkin as two different things given that their degree of animal traits is pretty different). Then, um, as a fantasy setting, there's no real "December", though we don't have names for months and days and stuff yet, eh-heh. Magic doesn't get a k, though that's pretty minor...

As for your magic, it's a good start but there should be some more information on what it can do.