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I still sort of feel iffy with this phrasing in your skill of [b]Perfect Parries[/b] for pretty much the same reasons. Did you revise your benchmarks like I suggested?— because I am noticing the two central ones I mentioned in this review are pretty much the same:

[quote]On the mental side of things there’s two or so bits I have issue with. Firstmost I would say [b]Deceitful Appearance[/b] isn’t a benchmark because it’s an inherent thing rather than something that was achieved through in-game study, training, or experience. He just happens to be shorter than normal? That’s not what I intended the benchmarks to be. Take a look at my CS for Hanako, BubbleGumKing’s for Marcelino, or even some working sheets such as the one from Superboy to see as a good measure of benchmarks. Make sure they are explained as if achieved.

The other issues I have are with [b]Tracker’s Gut[/b] for similar reasons (there is no explanation to it).

Remember to consider benchmarks are traits that have occurred due to efforts in the simulation; sometimes due to effort, study, training, or habit. Hanako is more fluid with her dodging because of outmaneuvering of opponents, Marcelino is apt at casting spells in combat after experience ignoring distractions on the battlefield, etc.[/quote]