[@SkullsandSlippers][@Avanhelsing] Tehre's a very fine balance between short things so other chars can react and long enough to give them something significant to react to beyond a single thing.  It's a shortcoming of forum rps.  I was going to reply today, but if people want a google docs convo I'm all in favor of this.  I just can't access it from work unless I have a computer, not jsut my kindle.  But I do most of my writing in the evenings anyhow, when I am not doing ABSOLUTELY NOTHING like I was for the past week (long story).  Anyhow, I set up [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SbdR0042nXwifkPvAJToCLtWSX7eMglU07IVkQvJzHY/edit?usp=sharing]a doc[/url], so feel free to jump in.  ^.^

Got things started, please go ahead and add to it.