[hider=Servant] Class Name: Assassin Nicknames:[i]The Legendary Serial Killer[/i], [i]Murderer in the Misty Night[/i] Alignment: Chaotic Evil Servant of: (insert master when I get around to it) Catalyst For Summon: Their Six Knives Weapon(s): Four knives of whose shape has been described as odd in appearance. Two butcher's knives, and a black bloodstained Scalpel. Wish: To return to the safe and comfortable warmth within her mothers womb. Abilities: [hider=Murderer of the Misty Night: A] [b]Murderer of the Misty Night[/b] is a skill associated with the Servant's nature as a serial killer rather than as an Assassin, which permits preemptive strike against all opponents. However, unconditional success of the skill is possible only at night. Requires a successful Luck Check for use during daytime. (From the conditions of their bodies, it is believed that all of the victims of Jack the Ripper were assailed when unguarded). [/hider] [hider=Mental Pollution: C] Provides a probability that mental interference magecraft will be rendered ineffective. In the condition that the Servant's master is of Evil alignment, and perpetrates acts of cruelty against the Servant, Mental Pollution will increase in rank, further increasing defenses against magecraft. However, as the Servant's psyche is inherently broken, this may result in irreversible deterioration. [/hider] [hider=Information Erasure: B] Information Erasure (情報抹消, Jōhō Masshō?) is the removal of information regarding the Servant's true name, abilities, and appearance from the records and memories of all witnesses, including the opponent, following the conclusion of an engagement. B: (Jack The Ripper) This effect is enforced even within digital recordings by a closed-circuit camera in broad daylight. However, evidence of the engagement is not removed from the scene, and by way of logical deduction, the Servant's identity may be revealed. [/hider] [hider= Surgical repair: E] Surgical Procedure (外科手術, Geka Shujutsu?) is the capability of surgical repair with use of a bloodstained scalpel, applicable to the Servant or her Master. E: Jack the Ripper (Assassin) Despite the technique being 120 years old, and somewhat unreliable by visual appearance alone, the procedures manage to attain their intended effect, boosted somewhat with application of Magical Energy. (The victims of were found with their organs removed in such a way as to require anatomical knowledge or skill with dissection.) [/hider] Class Abilities: [hider=Presence Concealment:A+] Complete presence cut off makes detection near impossible. Switching to the preparation of an attack drops the rank of Presence Concealment greatly, this weakness can be compensated by "Murderer of the Misty Night," and a [i]Near[/i] perfect surprise attack is possible. Some opponents may sense the rippers presence before she has the time to strike, giving them the time to block her attack. [/hider] Base Parameters: Strength: (筋力, Kinryoku?): C Endurance: (耐久, Taikyū?): C Agility: (敏捷, Binshō?): A Magical Power: (魔力, Maryoku?): C Good luck: (幸運, Kōun?): E Noble Phantasm: C [hider=Noble Phantasms] [hider=The Mist: Darkened Misty Metropolis] Name: The Mist: Darkened Misty Metropolis Quote: "Home." Rank: C Type: Barrier Range: 1-10 Description: [fig 1] [b]The Mist: Darkened Misty Metropolis[/b] is a Bounded Field Noble Phantasm generated from an antique lantern that reenacts the phenomenon of the "Mist of Death". Upon opening the shutter and gently touching the candle inside, the lit flame instantly begins to generate smoke-like mist from the bottom of the lantern. The mist, wrought of magical energy, forms a Bounded Field around the area that has a negative effect on all those who enter within the perimeter. Normal humans will quickly faint from pain upon coming in contact with the dense cloud of enveloping smoke, as simply breathing it in burns the throat and direct contact with eyes causes them to fester. They start to suffocate due to being unable to breath, and they cannot see anything as they writhe in pain. She can easily use this time to selectively kill them, or she can simply wait for them to be inflicted with death within a few turns. Magi will not immediately perish, but they will receive continuous damage. Heroic Spirits will not receive damage, but they will have a Rank Down in Agility. Jack is able to direct The Mist as she wishes in order to select which targets within the Bounded Field are affected, allowing her to leave a blank space around her Master. She is also able to limit it to only a specific area. It also affects the sense of direction of those within the field perimeter, making them lose their bearing of the area. Even within a familiar enclosed space, the mist deceives all those trying to escape into running around in circles in the same place without realizing it. Normal humans will always die in agony without ever being able to escape. The only means of escape for magi and Servants are the employment of Magecraft or a Rank B or higher in Instinct. The Mist quickly clears upon being deactivated. Maximum range of the mist is 20 meters, Keeping the mist active will constantly drain the Masters Mana Supply, [/hider] [hider=Maria The Ripper] Name: Maria the Ripper Quote: "Dismember." / "Paint the Town red." Rank: D-B Type: Anti-Unit Range: 1-10 Description: [b]Maria The Ripper: Holy Mother of Dismemberment[/b]. is a set of four strangely shaped knives. They are normally classified as Rank D Noble Phantasms, but they can be empowered under certain conditions by "the hatred of children who were denied everything, even the chance to sell their own flesh; the children who were abandoned back then by the 80,000 prostitutes in the London ghettos in order to maintain their own livelihood." If activated normally, they can be used to deal physical damage to the target while the conditions are not completely fulfilled. Upon fulfilling them, the damage rendered receives a large boost in Rank and the attack can guarantee instant death. If a) "it is night-time," b) "the target is a female," c) "it is misty," the knives manifest within the target's body, instantly vivisecting their flesh. The attack is communicated as a curse rather than a physical technique executed by utilizing the set of knives, so it may be used at range. Physical defense is impossible, but resistance to curses may permit evasion. The Maximum Range of this Technique is 15 Meters, That is only if all the conditions have been met, Otherwise the attack is a simple Enhanced cutting attack. [/hider] [/hider] [hider=True Name] [i]Jack the Ripper[/i] [/hider] [hider=Appearance] [hider=Fig 1][img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/typemoon/images/c/c3/FGOAssassinJackStage3.png/revision/latest?cb=20151216080732[/img] [/hider] [hider=Fig 2] [img]https://images4.alphacoders.com/691/691118.jpg[/img] [/hider] [hider=Fig 3] [img]http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/19870590/images/1342285340762.jpg[/img] [/hider] [/hider] [/hider] Alright so I made a simple nerf to her presence concealment surprise attack, It is no longer perfect, Due to how quickly her concealment drops an opponent whom is well aware of their surroundings will notice the sudden presence and will be capable of guarding themselves. (well of course unless she somehow manages to get directly behind you) Also for rp fairness. Murderer can't be used to score lethal blows. Edit: Added Ranges to the Noble Phantasms.