[@Luna558]

Besides a few messed up words it looks good, however, I need you to find a picture and add to the bio:

How does he feel about his father and two brothers? Since his mother obsessed over him, how did he feel about her? Stuff like past connections are important so we don't have to ask specific questions in the OOC about how their relations have been before hand.

And don't move ya character to the character section 'til I tell ya, ya ninny!