[@Hellis]Aight Imma do the double post thing again. The only thing I want to say is comb it for edits when you a feeling proactive. But other than that it looks good. 

[b][color=red]Quick Note for everyone[/color][/b]If you have a card for your character PM me please with that card from the deck you want to use and I need to know what the paragraph long mystery hook is. This is so that when we are close to finished with everyones characters I can deal cards. If I have lots of person cards then it means I have to write less cards but I need to know what card you want to use so I don't accidentally use it. Keeping in mind you don't have to write a card.