[quote=@AimeChambers]
[@AAB] 

I guess we could have the country names that way, but I'll mess up like a hundred times before I get it right, I liked the idea of the Tiadan people being called Tiadani though.
EDIT: The hiertanians and the Tiadani don't look that different at all, the only reason the Lutairians looks so different is because of their heritage.

[@KiwiBaer]

It takes so much more time when you write it out first twib.

[@AtomicNut]

So I think the people of lutaires seeing that kind of magic would think it's a sin against nature and be horrified. Tiadan is kinda more chill with that kind of stuff, not as bad as Hiertania, but still pretty fearful of it.
EDIT: Your post has a few pronouns off the main thing that stood out was that Alecto got it wrong. Anatole said to get ready for Luthier to become king, but luthier is the crown prince, Rowan is the second prince.
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She also slipped the word "overthrow." I'm spellchecking the whole thing. English is my third language. But Alecto got it right, Anatole's words were about to betray her XD.