[@Thecrash20] FF and FE combined?! What madness is this? Edit: Oh, and some Natsu verse in there too, I see. *cough* Along with what the above two have said, Dragons are [i]explicitly not wanted in this RP[/i]. Your character is a rather blatant attempt to get around that. And a poor one too. Your character is far too centered around dragons to even pass, but let us put that aside to critique the rest of it. First off, your character has too much power to be considered an A class, and as all the S class slots are filled that won't do. You have no stated weakensses, nor any details of note. Your character's personality, while an intriguing idea, boils down to "I can act however I want." More details would be nice. What are likes and dislikes? What ticks him off? What would make him flip his switch? History is lackluster as can be. While technically passible, it suffers the same as his personality, details details details. ...and beyond that I have nothing, because there is nothing else to him. No substance.