[quote=@Crimson Raven]
[@Thecrash20]

FF and FE combined?! What madness is this?

Edit: Oh, and some Natsu verse in there too, I see.

*cough*

Along with what the above two have said, Dragons are [i]explicitly not wanted in this RP[/i]. Your character is a rather blatant attempt to get around that. And a poor one too.

Your character is far too centered around dragons to even pass, but let us put that aside to critique the rest of it.

First off, your character has too much power to be considered an A class, and as all the S class slots are filled that won't do. You have no stated weakensses, nor any details of note. Your character's personality, while an intriguing idea, boils down to "I can act however I want." More details would be nice. What are likes and dislikes? What ticks him off? What would make him flip his switch?

History is lackluster as can be. While technically passible, it suffers the same as his personality, details details details.

...and beyond that I have nothing, because there is nothing else to him. No substance.
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That was kind.

I made him forever ago, but had to work for a living so I disappeared a bit. Ran it by the Lead gm and he said it was fine that why I didn't know the whole dragon restriction. The personality I thought was valid, since I won't be jumping around acting randomly, I could of said he was kind of a joker with more words. Regardless, personality if by far the most absurd thing to claim in any RP as everyone will act however they want, cause we're human and react differently to our situation, but how of course does depend on our personality as a person when we post. Keeping the characters just in mind on how we think they would act, but can never really do it justice since we act on OUR own personality. I guess it works great if you have a multiple personality disorder.

The history is of course is very short and sweet so it may develop(if the chance ever arises, they rarely don't in these kinds of RP's unless the user goes out on the limb for it). The history was more just prior information he would have told anyone who would ask, without revealing too much. 

With the Power, sure that could always be fixed, but I won't cause I'm definitely not going to be part of this RP. Apparently I don't match the skill of writing or RPing to match you or the others with my absolutely no substance character. Regardless how I was going to actually play him. I obviously don't have the ability to even try with all your recommendations on how to improve it from your "critique".

I bid you all adieu. Hope you all have a blast with Rp, it looks like a fun one and good luck!