Hey Rokku, after my long hiatus I seem to have come back at a rather interesting time, I've seen all of the reworks and things that have been asked of you throughout the lengthy creation of your Character.
Considering that you are on your 3rd amendment and have still failed to provide that has been asked of you.
Let's be fair, after looking through what you have provided in the bio it lacks a considerable amount of detail or expansion on fairly extensive moves.
For instance the trip to Riften from the Black Marsh; that'd take months and be both dangerous and expensive.
Either way it's possible yet you've provided nothing in it, okay it's not to do with your character; per say, but that's not an excuse as your parents story is just as important as your own. 
I once done 6 pages of story on my characters parents story although I'd never expect that level of detail.
Put it this way, a general rule is the more fantastical it is, the greater explanation it needs.
And yours is pretty darn fantastical.

Anyway I'm not going further into it as far as I'm concerned this role play is clearly not for you, unfortunately you just do not meet the level of detail and skill required in this role play.