[@Kho] Oh, word stressing, huh? You and your oratory writing style...

This is what I read in your example. I am so sorry:

And that...*narrator makes nervous swallowing sound into the microphone*...was the case with any man who was fated for glory - he had to have the means by which he could gallop!

You can express the same stresses without a line break. I will leave that as an exercise.

But don't mind me and my opinions. I was never one for poetry and I only want you to write in the way that makes you happy C:

[@shylarah] Don't mind my writing preferences, I was just poking fun and using the excuse to poke at Kho :)

Anyway, just about everyone here is in the "would it be interesting?" camp. As for fluff making established rules, we break that stuff on a regular basis, no sweat. Like I said, the only real limitation is might. Having it make sense with internal consistency is just bonus points. The fact is, there is still quite a lot of empty space on the canvas for new rules.