[quote=@Love Dove] I'm having my normal writers doubt but I think it will get better as I write the whole thing haha. Yes, I mean she isn't out on the streets at the moment, she's in a bar but if we need I'll move her. [/quote] No need for you to have doubts, Love. You're a fantastic writer even on your worst days. No need. I just want to write a small paragraph about the setting and such. :)