[@ShatteredZeroxk] Alright, show me a CS. 

[@Raddum] Looks good. My notes are as follows:

Keyblade a are magical, the fact that they are "blunt" doesn't stop them from cutting normally. Just a minor squabble there. 

The plot hooks look good. I've got something for her to do pretty early on with tinkering, and her justice fixation will actually interact really interestingly with the entire overarching plot.