[quote=@BlackSam3091] [@SilverFox] Yeah, as this is set after ME:3 I have no issue with Geth party members. Phalanx could give some fresh perspectives on things that other non-Geth characters would think of. [list][*]I’m afraid I don’t quite follow this paragraph – Was Phalanx exempt from the Reaper’s control of the Geth? How? And why didn’t it join the Reaper war? Merely because it decided helping the Quarians on Rannoch was a better use of her time? [color=fff79a]I changed it to where it was controlled during the battle of Rannoch, but survived the attack. If I remember correctly, after Shepard won at Rannoch and Legion sacrificed itself so that individual platforms can gain individual consciousnesses, the control was broken. In which is how Shepard gains Geth support in the war. And yes, pretty much concluded it was better to stay home. It was built for infiltrating, not run up and charge into war. But I can change it so that it was damaged.[/color] [*]Is there higher ranking Geth? I think they are democratically equal, and all decisions depend on consensus, rather than any structure of command. [color=fff79a]This I wasn't sure of it since now after the Reaper War, the Geth apparently have 'individuality', I'll change it though since their form of government probably doesn't change.[/color] [*]The episode with the human family and the terrorists is an odd, almost out of place addition. What terrorists was Phalanx ordered to attack, and why? And why did they take an interest in Clara? Was she a hostage, because they knew Phalanx was after them? And if so how did they know, and why didn’t they use her? I also agree with MrD’s assertation that ME tech isn’t advanced enough for a Geth to Frankenstein a body in the field, and I’m curious to why she attempted it in the first place. Is it supposed to be an example of when her emotions are at odds with her logical nature, and she somehow thought she could repair the girl? [color=fff79a]Indeed, it is supposed to represent at odds of logical, and emotion. Logically, it would be impossible for her to truly bring back life. But the thought of MAYBE she could based on the Reaper Husks, or a complete machine, android, cyborg, whatever. Switching to the logical of 'It is better to save a life at whatever cost.' even if that is the incorrect wavelength to follow. Trying was better then doing nothing.[/color] [color=fff79a]As for whom she attacked, supposed to be perhaps some random bandits. Rogues, whatever. And reason to capturing Clara is simply for blackmailing the wealthy family for money. Nothing personal to Phalanx. But I can cut that whole backstory out. It was something from the original CS in which in that rp Centuries passed since the Reaper War. But I can cut it out here.[/color][/list] [/quote]