[@Eviledd1984] It's like you didn't read up on anything at all in the first post and decided it was better to copy information from TheFake's CS instead of look at the actual CS template that has specific instructions about various things. You're out. [@SilverDawn] Astopolian colors are blue and white. That's a color code for him to aggro onto. Dude's a hell of a tsundere though. Goddamn just make up your mind. If he uses his spears as a weapon, can other people also grab onto them? Or not? Essentially, are these spears physical? Magical? Intangible? A curse that curses you with immortality and regeneration AND keeps your sanity in check is not a curse. Let's say that he gains this auto-regen ability by passively sapping the life force of those around him, as well as interfering with healing magic. A curse that ensures solitude, perhaps. [@Lemons] I'll say that these Ashphols can recharge their essence by absorbing more natural lightning, because having only four years of life is sorta annoying, cause it takes time to learn shit as well. Would the basic human form look totally like a human? Also, would an Ashphol be considered a living being? Or is it just an elemental with a mind? [@Jerkchicken] I dislike the idea of a dog, even a magical one that can speak and shit. Doesn't seem to fit the setting I have in mind and it sounds too outlandish. Essentially what Click said. Bards exist. They're singers and musicians. Magic that comes from song is also a thing, but it's too slow to properly incorporate into combat that can go supersonic. Buffing up other individuals is possible, but, like healing magic, Talentium only increases the amount of people that can be affected, not the potency of the buff.