[quote=@PrivateVentures] [@Dervish]That is all very good advice. I've been solo writing for too long! I like stories with multiple perspectives from multiple different characters, so I tend to stray over in some ways. I'll keep an eye out for that. Killer Krogan, by the way. [/quote] Thanks! Glad you enjoy him. I always wonder how people take my characters out of the gate. Hell, I wonder what people think of them months or years later. >_> I'm actually an awful solo writer. I have the hardest time trying to plan out a story and characters and all the plot points and so on so forth. I probably should actually try sometime. [quote=@Mega Birb] I mean I killed the Council on my most recent Paragon run. Assholes... I have also reached a point where expanded histories are a pain to write. I might have to give a shorthand "What's happened since Saren?" version if it's gonna be good. [/quote] I pretty much summed up the events of Mass Effect and the post war period in just a few short paragraphs, nothing too in depth. Everyone knows what happened in the series, all you really have to do is make note of what your character was doing at that point. It's the developmental years and major life events are the stuff that really matters for being focused on.