Geh. Now I'm feeling inept.

I can't see the error. "This" can't be used there? It is referring to her supposed future death. Sure, "it" does sound better now that I consider it, but "this" can also be used to refer to a thing. Saying "have this" while giving an item works. Ergh.

Myum. [i][sub][sup]I refuse to have my confidence be shaken! I will keep writing as I always have while I try to learn! *poses dramatically*[/sup][/sub][/i]

Edit: That is, at least in cases when we know what "it" is, then it can be "this"... Right? ... Er... "We will confront this monster"->"we will confront this" (when they know we're referring to the monster), um... ... ... Geh...

Edit 2: I am extremely concerned as to what error caused Amelie's name to be replaced with Penny's...