I fight back! 1. My CS and Sample are definetly readable now. 2. I showed my CS and Sample to Kaga (Kagamine) one of the people which were in charge of the Writter of the Month OFFICIAL CONTEST on the Old Guild which said that it showed a great level of grammar accuracy and dedication to making the post. I hold her oppinion twice more important then yours since she was one of the most influental people on the Old Guild and one of the rare people which I trust about grammar stuff. 3. I read at least one of your IC posts and glanced at a few other ones which you and the other made and I think my Sample and CS are at least incredibly close to that grammar level if not at the same. 4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, at least by my opionion, a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post. If you want don't like this then do what you told me to do. 5. If you wish to drag this stuff feel free, but when it comes to argumenting my stand I was one of the best, if not the best, in my school. You have been warned. Extra - If you need a show how good and dedicted my post can be take a look at my new RP. (LINK is here:[url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/16966/posts/ooc])The first OOC post explaining the setting is clear, intresting and allows the roleplayers to be creative. I was also willing to spend a whole day working on it and the map to make the experience of roleplaying on such a RP nicer and smoother. Gamer5, former GM and member of numerours Casual RPs, current GM of the Lands of Lemea and WOTM Casual-level winner.