[quote=@Jay Kalton]
Sorry for the [i]huge[/i] delay, new ideas, writer's block and time constraints are being a total pain.
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Haha, that is absolutely fine. I've been quite busy (and I've gotten poked due to it on RPG) myself, but hopefully this week is different.

[b]EDIT:[/b]

[@DeadBeatWalking] — I will do a complete look over when you have finished your CS in full, but I [i]did[/i] read a bit of it before realizing you had no jutsu list and things look up shaping nicely. I would also say I pretty much agree with what Ryo stated about the “pseudo-telepathic” communication. 

[@Sergeant] — I do not have much issues going forward with your CS, I would probably say it is fine to move into the characters tab so we can start to get the gears moving on this RP.

[@Indra] — Good improvements. But Ryo is probably right that I’d be very wary of the fact—I just don’t see Kazuma allowing himself to get captured whilst the murderer of his wife was free, especially with an unlocked Mangekyou among other marque factors. I’d see him becoming a missing-nin over a prisoner. We probably should discuss options before accepting this part of the character. I don’t really have many poignant issues beyond this.