[hider=Good Evening][center][h1][color=00bfff]Jirah[/color][/h1][/center]

[color=00bfff][b]Full Name:Sir Jirah Goffet[/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Nickname/Alias:Wyverntounge, the bit knight[/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Age:18[/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Gender:male with feminine demeanor[/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Sexuality:attracted to  femininity, actual contents of one's pants notwithstanding [/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Country:Erihollow[/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Occupation:only recently knighted, no noble blood, works as a bounty hunter[/b][/color] 

[color=00bfff][b]Appearance:draped in simple robes is a heavily scarred twig of a man with wispy silver hair and two beady purple eyes[/b][/color] 
[color=00bfff][b]Background: Jirah was a simple black smith, little worth noting, just the way he liked it, when a feral wyvern attacked his village, in the midst of battle, he discovered his ability to communicate with the beast, not that Jakyr was in the mood to talk. Jirah managed to subdue the dragon, but not before being bit, and poisoned. For nearly a year he struggled against the venom, during which time a local lord knighted him, expecting him to die. The poison left his body torn and weak, but he survived, which itself was enough to earn Jakyr's respect, and Lord Hujha's ire.[/b][/color]

[color=00bfff][b]Strengths:[/b][/color]
[indent][color=00bfff]having already faced one of the world's worst poisons, it would be difficult finding a substance that could hurt him.[/color] 
[color=00bfff]he is also deceptively quick and strong[/color]
[color=00bfff]his wits are quick too[/color][/indent]
[color=00bfff][b]Weaknesses:[/b][/color]
[indent][color=00bfff]he does have a limp[/color]
[color=00bfff]and is proud to a fault[/color]
[color=00bfff]and sensitive about his appearance[/color][/indent]
[color=00bfff][b]Equipment:[/b][/color]
[indent][color=00bfff]simple robes[/color]
[color=00bfff]a "walking stick" (hint:it's a staff)[/color]
[color=00bfff]a relaxing tea blend[/color][/indent]


[center][h1][color=00bfff]Jakyr[/color][/h1][/center]

[color=00bfff][b]Full Name:Jakyr, the ravenous[/b][/color]
[color=00bfff][b]Age:112[/b][/color]
[color=00bfff][b]Gender:female, exhibits traditionallymasculine traits[/b][/color]
[color=00bfff][b]Race:purebred wyvern thank you very much[/b][/color]

[color=00bfff][b]Appearance:in dragon form she possesses shimmering violent scales and intensely blue eyes, in human form she retains the same incredible eye color, along with auburn hair and skin like caramel, both forms show signs of grace[/b][/color]
[color=00bfff][b]Background:Jakyr was always hard-headed and adventurous one day, she wandered into the desert and became lost, by the time she arrived at a human village, she was extremely hungry and thirsty, she attacked the humans, knowing they would have food, one of them fought her down, screaming in her head to stop fighting. That same human weathered her venom, a feat that she thought impossible.[/b][/color]

[color=00bfff][b]Strengths:[/b][/color]
[indent][color=00bfff]exceptionally potent venom (seriously, how did that guy survive that?)[/color]
[color=00bfff]flexibility akin to that of a snake[/color]
[color=00bfff]strong will[/color][/indent]
[color=00bfff][b]Weaknesses:[/b][/color]
[indent][color=00bfff]stubborn[/color]
[color=00bfff]doesn't know when to relax (this applies to bother life in general and when wrestling)[/color]
[color=00bfff]her will has a big hole right where medesty should be, she is vain[/color][/indent][/hider]

This is basically the format you gave me, unless you just meant that the color was awkward? And could you elaborate on "more detail" cause I left scarface's description vague for a reason.