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[hider=The Shield of Veranth]
[b]Name:[/b] Bartellemeo Palladino
[b]Age:[/b] 30
[b]Residence:[/b] The Shield of Veranth resides within the main head quarters of the city guard, an imposing structure that's crawling with guardsmen all day everyday.
[b]Personality:[/b] Bartellemeo is an honorable man and a formidable warrior with a habit of leading from the front and enough worldly experience to have a hand in carving out the destiny of Veranth, hopefully for the better. He cares only for the safety of his city and the people it houses. He is tough on any crime that can be found, but he is toughest on corruption, as he sees a guardsman going back on his oath to uphold the law for personal gain as an unforgivable act of treachery. Though he maintains enough of a pious appearance to not be hauled off for heresy, Bartellemeo has no true respect for the church. And though he is very good at his job as a guard and is a well known defender of the people, his social graces among the nobility he has found himself in as the commander of the city guard leave much to be desired.
[b]Attributes:[/b][list][*] Charisma: 0
[*] Combat: 2
[*] Fame: 2
[*] Faith: 0[/list][b]Skills:[/b][list][*] Grace: 0
[*] Speech: 1
[*] Literacy: 1
[*] Trade: 0
[*] Luck: 1
[*] Dueling: 2
[*] Strategy: 1
[*] Leadership: 2[/list]
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