[@Avanhelsing] Just a few issues that we've noticed with your CS. I’ll put them in bullet point so that you can correct them. 

First off, if you could find a picture of someone wearing more clothes, that would be a start. It doesn’t have to be a uniform, but just wearing more in general would be much better.

Next up, there’s a problem with how he gets to St. Fortuna’s. First off, this is one of the oldest and most famous schools in the country, so most everyone who lives in Prydain has heard of it. Next off, they do not invite you to join them. This is a very exclusive private school that only takes 5,000 students at any given time. You must apply to the school and pay tuition to attend.

As your character is not of a wealthy or even middle class background, he would be unable to pay the tuition. St. Fortuna’s does offer scholarships, however, you have to show outstanding academic scores and keep up with the curriculum, as falling on academic probation easily leads to expulsion.

In addition, the school is very, VERY picky about keeping a clean record. Criminal activities of any sort would not be allowed at all, and anyone with a criminal record would be refused entry. Thievery, fights, and underage working would get you off of the list faster than the speed of light.

In order to fix these issues, I would suggest finding a picture that has a shirt on it, fixing the back story to either give him more intelligence and drive to be at the school or make him of a better financial background, and remove the thievery and fight-club backstory entirely.

After these changes are made, we would be happy to review your quiz and accept you. :)