[quote=@Hammerman] [@Invader Len] [@onenote] Oh yeah, forgot to tell you that I already fixed my CS. And my character's a mage. Thank God I didn't make her a familiar. [/quote] Just two questions/concerns. You mentioned her health and frailty, and how they kept her from attending school before. Why? Why is she sick and frail? Is she still sickly? If she’s so delicate and unhealthy that attending school is too dangerous, how is she supposed to fair at a boarding school? If you could explain this and tell us if she’s still sickly and to a more specific extent, that would help immensely. Next up, for the question of her tutoring, all the characters in the RP start out at the same level magic wise. Because some characters don’t have their magic or ability manifest until their first year, its highly unusual that she would get this tutoring at an early age. This would make her much more advanced than the other mages, and for equality’s sake, we’re gonna have to put our foot down on that. She can have received supplementary tutoring after starting high school, but I’m gonna be highly skeptical about before. If you could address these issues over her health and tutoring, and correct your CS accordingly, we would be happy to admit your character. :)