[@MechonRaptor] Excellent! Glad it pleases you!

[@TheHangedMan] Just one question. While Matthew’s eccentricities and delusions may toe the line of insanity, he is not going to go over that line, correct? I’m simply concerned, mostly because of the mention of sadism and the implication of insanity. As mentioned in the rules, insanity is forbidden. This is because I’ve often seen it, coupled with sadism, as an excuse for characters to 1) be inconsistent with their actions and personality and 2) deliberately cause strife and upset to other characters in ways that do not match the genre.

I don’t mind allowing his eccentricities or his sadism, but you can see why I would be uneasy with both. This is not going to be a dark RP, and so having both of these things in his character is rather out of genre. If you can tone down both of them or give him some kind of counter, such as he’s a sadist but the sight of blood makes him ill, or he’s eccentric but the thought of torture makes him cringe, that would make me feel much better about your character being in St. Fortuna’s.

Also, while I understand the trauma of a young child being in the room with a corpse, I cannot understand why his parents would not take him to therapy of some sort. I’d like an “exit strategy” to his route of madness. Either have him attending therapy on behest of his parents to overcome his trauma (he doesn’t have to be working very hard at it, just has to attend), or tone down the effects of the trauma.

With these corrections made, we would be happy to review your quiz results! Errorist and onenote are on now, and we’re going to be reviewing CS’s in just a moment!