[@Invader Len] I did the edits, but I guess I should explain why I did the bio like that, or something.

I guess the brunt of what I have to say is that I know a bunch of stuff you pointed out. I read the magic stuff and I made Curtis in knowledge of that. Thing is, I guess I kind of modelled him off of myself in high school? He has more drive than me, at least. I hope I articulated this point better in his bio, but Curtis has his mind set on a specific goal, even if he doesn't know how exactly he'll translate that into a long term career, and I put in to represent his youth and inexperience.

Does that help? I'm not sure about how to articulate it better than saying I half-made this character based on what I felt like I was in high-school.