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Oh my... Angela's gunna loooooove him. Is it bad that I already have a collab in mind..? Haha

Anyway; I read through it all, and when it comes to the degree's and such, I automatically jumped to the conclusion that he attended college/ or university, however, I can see where it might have been taken that he did not attend. I would ask on this point that in his strengths, where you have it listed, can you please slip in perhaps where he got his degree's, or what school/ where it was that he attended. This is a simple solution to something that could indeed be taken either way should one miss information listed later on in the biography.

As for the suit; I have to agree with Cait on this one. It can come across as overpowered and extremely hard to take down by attacks, however, your suggestions of a solution are definitely something that we can take into consideration. I do agree with the both of you when it comes to toning this down, and to limiting it to certain attacks- like you mentioned, if you were to limit it to, not an immunity, but maybe a strong resistance to energy and some electrical attacks (such as Winston's attack) I would be more than happy with that, however, I would suggest that the longer the attack goes on, the less resistance he has against it, like in the case of Reinhardt's shield; the more you shoot it, the more it cracks until POOF, it's gone and bullets are flying left right and center. Think of it as though it's an MMORPG, the more hits you take, the weaker your armor until it breaks (<- I have plenty of experience with my armor breaking; I'm horrible at that...)

As for the last point, as I am not a nurse myself, and I have very little knowledge of the inner workings of the ear apart from what I have asked Cait about previously for one of my own characters; I will allow you both to work this one out.

Other than this; I look forward to interacting with him, and am very excited for the dynamic between him and Angela.

EDIT: Cait gave the all clear for the re-wording on the last point; so once that's all done I have no issues with him :'3