Map updated. [@Ryteb Pymeroce] Thanks for reading. I can't accept this sheet as is. I will try and pinpoint some of the issues I have with it. If your not Rytebs, ignore the following. Thx. [hider=Rytebs eyes only] [i]You fucking looked didn't you!? Shame![/i] Your name: We already have a Bartollemeo. I realize your name is spelled a little bit different but for sake of convenience and clarity in who is who, change this to something else. I have some links posted in the cs tab if you need help finding suitable names. Character Concept: This roleplay is based on the republic of Venice, Florence and Rome around the time of the Renaissance. (or just past it). Your character concept, I'm having trouble digesting in this scenario (and this sort of political-military RP). Your character is a sort of robin hood, or let's be honest, the grey fox from the elder scrolls:oblivion. That doesn't work in this political climate. Criminals...were criminals in the Renaissance, and the punishments were exceedingly harsh. If you want to play some sort of corrupt bureaucrat or member of the clergy or merchant etc. that is more than welcome here. If you want to discuss your character further, please send me a PM. Honestly, I wish to add you to the roster, but I'm trying to make sure my players have the best go at it, and that is not working for Volpe. Thanks! [/hider]