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4. My style of writting is based around long, multiple sentances linked together. Yes, this is a hard thing to do, but in the long run and with good linking it becomes a beautiful writting style which creates, at least by my opionion, a feeling like you are reading a novel not a post.
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Long, multiple sentences linked together are considered run-ons. They dont give anyone room to breathe when they are saying them, and overall ruin posts in my opinion. I honestly have never seen a novel or well written paper include run-ons like this. I dont know how your English teachers let you get away with them.

I do understand that this is your writing style and how you must think, but this kind of writing is tedious to read. Its nothing small like using past tense all the time, its something big, as in usage and mechanics errors. If I were an English teacher Id be giving you at least a D for writing like this.

If you arent as interested and commited in this RP to fix your grammatical errors, then unfortunately Im going to ask you not to join. You obviously have more devotion towards the other RP's youre in. Its hard to juggle a lot of RPs at once. If this is the case, then I hope you have a good experience elsewhere in the Guild. Your character is interesting, but the grammar is just below our standards.

EDIT: I can go over your sample and help you correct these errors, if you'd like? Just as an example.