[quote=@Lmpkio] Welp here's my character that is based off an older profile from War Of The Multiverse. Totally redid her bio though. Hopefully she's fine and I'll probably pick another character of mine to fight in this RP. [center][hider=The Queen Of Terror] [h1][color=fff200][b]Queen Ghidorah[/b][/color][/h1] [img]https://k60.kn3.net/taringa/A/3/3/6/7/2/JuanMuoz58/C16.jpg[/img] [h3][b][color=fff200]Frenzied Kaiju Form[/color][/b][/h3] [hider=Kaiju Form] [img]http://pre06.deviantart.net/c731/th/pre/f/2016/239/6/6/image_by_tapwing-dafhj2p.jpg[/img] [/hider] [color=fff200][b]Alias:[/b][/color] (キングギドラ Kingu Gidora); "Queen Of Terror"; "Monster Zero"; The Dragon Queen; Etc [color=fff200][b]Race:[/b][/color] Kaiju Gijinka (Human/Kaiju Hybrid) [b][color=fff200]Sex:[/color][/b] Female [color=fff200][b]Class:[/b][/color] All-Round Creature-Morph [color=fff200][b]Equipment:[/b][/color] Ghidorah doesn't carry much in the form of arsenal, however she does carry a [url=http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/runescape2/images/5/56/Golden_katana_detail.png/revision/latest?cb=20150419082333]hand-crafted golden katana[/url] in the way of weaponry. This is used as an answer to close combat sword-fighting, in which otherwise she uses her magic and strength to keep her opponents at bay. [color=fff200][b]Abilities:[/b][/color] [list] [*] [b][color=fff200]Enhanced Strength:[/color][/b] Ghidorah has an incredible amount of strength to back her up. One direct-landing punch can send a person flying a few meters and she can carry a normal person by the neck with ease. [*] [b][color=fff200]Enhanced Agility:[/color][/b] While fast in her own wake, Ghidorah is surprisingly nimble in her human form, being able to dodge many attacks some even being at point-blank range if she is able to detect it fast enough. [*] [b][color=fff200]Wings:[/color][/b] Ghidorah's wings provide both flight and minor shielding against some lighter-based weaponry, such as bullets and laser fire. However, both physical trauma and subjection to fire can damage them, restricting her movement and defense capabilities. [*] [b][color=fff200]Gravity Beams:[/color][/b] In her human form, Ghidorah is able to fire bolts of lightning from her fingertips to bombard her opponent with volleys of electricity. They electrocute their opponent upon contact with organic beings and prolonged exposure can cause them to be fried alive or at the very least deformed severely. A stronger variant can be used to cause minor explosions upon contact with anything. In her Frenzied Kaiju form, these bolts come from her three mouthes in a beam and can be injected into the opponent directly if she bites them. [*] [b][color=fff200]Energy Shield:[/color][/b] In her kaiju form, Ghidorah is able to form a golden round energy shield that deflects energy-based weaponry. She can also release this energy shield and send it colliding with the ground, which will cause a massive explosion. She can use a weaker version in human form, but causes her to use a ton of energy in both instances. Often used as a final attack to finish her opponent off. [*] [b][color=fff200]Hurricane Winds:[/color][/b] Ghidorah's Wings can also flap fast enough to produce winds that can knock opponents off if they don't have a firm grip on the ground. In rare instances, it's able to slow down physical projectile weaponry, like bullets. It's more effective if Ghidorah is in her kaiju form. [*] [b][color=fff200]Constricting Necks/Tail:[/color][/b] In her kaiju form, Ghidorah is able use one of her three necks, or two of her tails, to constrict her opponent, restricting their movement and causing them to choke, gasping for air until they suffocate to death. [/list] [color=fff200][b]Fighting Style:[/b][/color] Queen Ghidorah is a smart fighter, in the way that she will first test her opponents ability before going all out. She may even take a few minor blows just to see how strong said character is. She calculates her opponent's patterns and abilities, searching for a weak-spot, and exploiting it by going on a full assault, not letting her opponent get the chance to strike back. She is also infamous for faking her own defeat or demise, appearing to be dead but then waking up and issuing a surprise counter-attack on her opponent. She's not a fair fighter in the slightest. [color=fff200][b]Personality:[/b][/color] Queen Ghidorah is an arrogant, vile, and power-hungry monster of a creature. Cold and calculative, she is a patient yet deadly fighter, often glorifying herself in one point and then being sly and sneaky in another. She is ultimately unpredictable in her actions and is both cruel merciless in battle, mocking her opponent's skills during combat. Of course, when in her frenzied rage of extreme assault, she can get a bit carried away and careless of her surroundings if too preoccupied, causing her to be narrowly-focused on an objective. This can be a problem if she's fighting multiple opponents. She can sometimes underestimate her opponents and can get punished greatly for being so careless. [color=fff200][b]Bio:[/b][/color] Queen Ghidorah was born on the remote planet known as Planet X, just 40 light years from Earth. She was born to a royal family, known as the Ghidorians, who had the blood that allows them to transform into a monstrous three-headed dragon. Spoiled as a child, she quickly began to have high ambitions. And those ambitions would be deadly in the long run. She eventually became strong enough to overthrow her royal family, murdering them all in cold-blood, taking the throne all to herself. For almost a hundred years did she rule her planet under a fierce tyrannical fury, only calming down after the old supporters had been whipped clean from the scene. However, she slowly began to age, to the point where she began to grower weaker and more frail with each passing year. This, accompanied by a growing source of paranoia and insanity, caused her to find ways to ultimately find some cure and become immortal. Her answer in achieving this came from a loyal priestess, who guided her to a sacred underground temple of the royal Ghidorians. There she led her to a pool of golden-liquid, what has been known as "The Golden Nectar". This "Nectar" is a pool of highly intense mana-like energy that came from deep beneath the ground. Every relative of the Royal family had a tiny drop of this nectar inserted to their body as a way to give them good luck and spirits, while also tapping slightly into their gijinka powers. It is sometimes used as a healing pot where it can heal wounds and in some instances return the youth into an elderly Ghidorian, but most importantly it is the literal life blood of the planet itself. While it can do such miraculous effects, being addicted and extremely dependent on it will cause the user to become corrupted and eventually such all of the life out from the planet, causing it to be a barren wasteland. Only in a balanced amount may it both preserve Ghidorah's youth as well as the planet as is. Yet Queen Ghidorah ignored the warning and eventually sucked the entire planet dry, causing her people to perish as well as every other living organism on the planet. It had become utterly inhabitable literally overnight. While it did preserve her youth, Ghidorah wanted more power and more life-blood. Thus begun her several thousand year reign of terror across the galaxy, destroying planets and stealing their life blood to continue becoming youthful. She was surprised to see tat every planet she came across had this blood in the first place She was dependent solely on it and it alone. Eventually she came to the planet that was Earth, a world she had heard about from various alien textbooks and civilizations. Ghidorah made her way onto the planet's surface, preparing to search the entire planet for its source of life blood. Yet her plan would be foiled by three of the planet's native gijinka. Godzilla, Mothra, and Rodan, Earth's mightiest guardians of its age, they began a battle that would almost rip the entire planet apart, yet after a long and grueling fight did they drive the alien out of their homeworld. They almost killed Ghidorah on multiple occasions, but alas she was able to escape before she could meet her maker. Ghidorah was casted out into space once again, furious at her humiliating defeat at the hand of three minor kaiju gijinka like herself. She vowed vengeance against the planet that defied her, like a spoiled brat, and to rip it apart piece by piece. But she needed help. Eventually, she found a tournament in the farthest regions of space and decided to join, in an attempt to restart her empire from scratch by impressing them. If they can be impressed, they can be controlled... [color=fff200][b]Wish:[/b][/color] Ghidorah is a vain and powerful gijinka warrior. She's participating to show the multiverse her true potential and power, to put fear into the hearts of all. Perhaps she can gain respect and valuable allies if her power is shown to the masses. [color=fff200][b]Echo:[/b][/color] Planet X is her home world. Once her place of birth, she quickly drained the world of its life force and turned it into a barren wasteland. While it physically has no meaning for her in terms of resources, she also respects the pass rulers in the Ghidorah heritage, offering a more 'sacred' aspect to it. The rulers were once worshipped in a temple and while still in tact, no one but the gijinka goes in their to gain moral and sometimes physical power from it. [color=fff200][b]Appearance:[/b][/color] In her human form, Ghidorah stands at a towering 6'5", with a wing span almost doubling her entire body size from the shoulders up (unlike from the waist as shown in the picture). She has pale caucasian skin, with amber eyes, and long spiraling golden hair running down to her upper thigh, with horns sticking from the top of her head. She wears a golden dress, with white long gloves and golden dragon plates, reminding everyone of her dragon transformation. She also wears white knee-high boots with heels, though she is somehow able to act perfectly without tripping over surprisingly. [color=fff200][b]Frenzy:[/b][/color] Ghidorah's frenzied form is a monstrous, three-headed, golden dragon with a purposeful glimpse and a terrible sound. In her own universe, her height was at a terrifying 150 meters in height and weighed in at 175,000 tons. Now that height has decreased to 25 meters tall, which is still massive, but not beyond-skyscraper heights, and weighs around 20 tons. [color=fff200][b]Inventory:[/b][/color] Phylactery (More TBA) [/hider][/center] [/quote] There's a problem with the concept that's immediately apparent: Ghidorah is a preexisting character, owned by a company, and if this were a real story this would be grounds for suing on copyright infringement. However...since the crux of the character (the human form and the personality enclosed within) isn't a part of the official character, I might be willing to let this particular instance slide, and warn against similar sheets in the future. Her powers are too much. Characters can be pretty strong, but yours is over the top. I'm looking for specific downsides and only one or two powers max. Superhuman strength to the degree you described is not a problem, but being able to dodge point-blank attacks is a power in its own right, as is blocking non-physical damage with her wings (though if that's the case it shouldn't block bullets, which are physical). Add to that lightning that can fry someone, explosive lightning, and an explosive energy shield, and it's way, way too strong to start out with. More powers mean each one is weaker. Either eliminate all but two of the powers (except strength), or make each one weak enough so that they're only usable and not overwhelming. For instance, she could shoot individual blasts of lightning with no explosive potential, use her wings as shields in an emergency, and manifest a momentary energy deflector shield that could provide a short-range explosion if struck. If you drastically weaken her powers, you can keep her Frenzy pretty much the way it is as a sort of payoff if achieved, but given that true Ghidorah would be extremely tough to deal with on a physical level alone, I would recommend weakening it as well. About the backstory: IC, there is no such thing as the multiverse. There's no awareness of other dimensions existing; its something that's happening solely for the ability for people to pick characters they are really interested in and would have fun playing. Ghidorah couldn't 'find' the tournament of her own volition. Even if she did, the objective of the tournament is the granting of a wish, and Ghidorah's 'wish' to impress people you imply will result from her winning, not as a result of what wish she makes. In essence, that means your character doesn't actually have a wish. I'm concerned that Ghidorah is a character with such inherent overwhelming power that even if you brought down her abilities to be acceptable with the RP's starting level, there isn't any good justification for this planet-destroying tyrant to even entertain the suggestion of a few mysterious human strangers. [quote=@Roughdragon1] Just wondering, when you say the character can be from any universe, but must be original, you mean that we may create a character who comes from a certain movie/book/game universe, but may not be any of the existing characters from that universe? [/quote] That's precisely correct.