[quote=@Lugubrious] There's a problem with the concept that's immediately apparent: Ghidorah is a preexisting character, owned by a company, and if this were a real story this would be grounds for suing on copyright infringement. However...since the crux of the character (the human form and the personality enclosed within) isn't a part of the official character, I might be willing to let this particular instance slide, and warn against similar sheets in the future. Her powers are too much. Characters can be pretty strong, but yours is over the top. I'm looking for specific downsides and only one or two powers max. Superhuman strength to the degree you described is not a problem, but being able to dodge point-blank attacks is a power in its own right, as is blocking non-physical damage with her wings (though if that's the case it shouldn't block bullets, which are physical). Add to that lightning that can fry someone, explosive lightning, and an explosive energy shield, and it's way, way too strong to start out with. More powers mean each one is weaker. Either eliminate all but two of the powers (except strength), or make each one weak enough so that they're only usable and not overwhelming. For instance, she could shoot individual blasts of lightning with no explosive potential, use her wings as shields in an emergency, and manifest a momentary energy deflector shield that could provide a short-range explosion if struck. If you drastically weaken her powers, you can keep her Frenzy pretty much the way it is as a sort of payoff if achieved, but given that true Ghidorah would be extremely tough to deal with on a physical level alone, I would recommend weakening it as well. About the backstory: IC, there is no such thing as the multiverse. There's no awareness of other dimensions existing; its something that's happening solely for the ability for people to pick characters they are really interested in and would have fun playing. Ghidorah couldn't 'find' the tournament of her own volition. Even if she did, the objective of the tournament is the granting of a wish, and Ghidorah's 'wish' to impress people you imply will result from her winning, not as a result of what wish she makes. In essence, that means your character doesn't actually have a wish. [/quote] Yeesh... yeah I was afraid you might say that. And only one to two powers max (minus strength)? Welp... I guess I'll nerf her accordingly. Again, I'll keep enhanced strength... but I'll get rid of agility, nerf the wings accordingly, have the gravity beams not have explosive capabilities, nerf the gravity shield accordingly, keep the Hurricane Winds (but only for the Kaiju form), and keep the neck movements for the kaiju in place. Only in frenzied mode do they become as is. Does this sound good to you? Well I'll scrap the multiverse thing out of it then. Wish wise I suppose she becomes immortal. Does all of this sound good to you? Edit: I've edited all the stuff in my character's profile. How does it look?