[@Rithy] By the way, the "mines-entryway-compound- BLOW 'EM NOW" was quoted from Anderson. Those are just the only parts Ellis could decipher over the noise. Ellis didn't say that, he just thought it was funny. Oh, and if anyone is interested in reading/critiquing ([i]please help me[/i]) my first drafts, it's all here: [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/160550-pens-and-swords/ooc#post-4204602]Pens and Swords[/url]