[@Eviledd1984] Sheets looking better. Though why have you listed Lady Deathstrike and Harry Osborne in his supporting characters section? You make no mention to them prior to that. If it's just to pad the CS with recognizable names, there's really no reason to do that. Just leave that section blank, and you can work on acquiring a supporting cast during the IC, which is really far more fluid and rewarding than just name dropping. Though if there is a reason to have them there, please let me know.

As to the dialogue fiasco of 2017, like I said to begin with, it was merely constructive criticism. I made my piece, it got out of hand, now it's over. I don't need anyone to apologize to me. [@Burning Kitty] is free to continue writing in whichever style he's comfortable with. I'm just glad that it's done.  

[@Demon Shinobi] If your having trouble with coming up with ideas on how to start your character, I might be able to help. Faen is going to be recruiting aspiring young heroes to face off with a world-threatening villain very shortly. Also it's nice of you to apologize for [@MthePathSeeker], but it's not a problem. We all have to start somewhere, and we all make mistakes.