[@vFear] Looks very good, accepted for sure.

[@FrozenEcstasy] I understand your intentions, but trying to represent a dichotomy with a single character is a tall order, especially if all aspects of them are present at once. When I talk about refining a concept, vFear's character completely delivers on that idea. Nearly every aspect of Eleven builds on a singular theme, resulting in a very strong character thematically. It's much better to have one theme that works great than multiple that are underwhelming, which is about my appraisal of Omega thus far.

I think some revisions should be in order, not in least to differentiate Omega from Eleven. Perhaps rather than a war android, Omega is an artificial life form, of a race of similar beings? Reproducing, self-sufficient, sapient automatons. This could be the entirety of their race, and perhaps even their planet is artificial, which is how they managed to outlive their sun. This brings up other thoughts; perhaps their civil war is over the last remaining energy resources on the planet, rather than being purely ideological. Omega's motivations could be greatly simplified at this point, making him simply a refugee from the civil war rather than some kind of escapee.

These are merely suggestions of course; it's a direction you can take the character that would be unique, interesting, and better focused.