[quote=@Iuniper]
Also, to anyone - I would definitely appreciate critiques on my CS if you have any, since you all seem to have a really good grasp on writing your characters, and something I've not done in a while. I'm rereading my CS and it seems startlingly unrealistic. 
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I don't know about the others, but I'm pretty shoddy myself ^_^). Still, my words of wisdom would be to focus more on how your posts are going to turn out; If that means focusing on improving your structure, grammar or vocabulary (I don't think you've got any troubles on that last front), then do so. The Character-Sheet is an outline, an idea of how you want to portray that character -- so while it's nice to improve it, unless you're doing really poorly, I don't think you need to fret much over it >_).

If you really are feeling like it's not up to scratch, then why so? What makes the character *too* unrealistic, in your opinion?