[@Lauder]
Awesome character, there's just a few things I'd like clarifying. Under her skills section it includes "translation" - presumably, what she has learnt from the dead. You'll need to list what language she learnt enough to translate to a novice degree, and I'm sure it couldn't have all come from the dead. Perhaps mention on her travels that she picked up a few books in the language you decide to pick? Also, in her inventory, you may want to include things such as money and some kind of bedroll or blanket for sleeping. Optional, of course, but we don't want our characters to freeze during their nighttime nap.

Oh, and when your character is all fixed up and accepted, you won't be posting from inside the gate or the city; it'll be outside. She's fine having wandered around Kvatch, just as long as she got out before the main gate opened. You can still do an introductory post however, just on the outside of the city walls. You and the others won't have to wait much longer to meet up with the others, as soon as my Co-GM posts we'll be moving things along and getting the gate closed. :)

Other than that, I can't see a thing wrong with her! Unless [@Leos Klien] has anything to add, you just fix up those things I've mentioned, as you can stick her in the character tab.


[@Vas Khaleen]
While your effort is appreciated, I think this roleplay may be too advanced for you. While I could talk you through the things that would need changing in your CS, the level of writing is not up to the standard required, and I'd hate to waste your time anymore than I have already. I'd be more than happy to give constructive criticism for you in regards to the future, but I won't be able to accept anything of the level you've offered. Thank you for applying, and best of luck in your future writing endeavours. :)